Thank you so much for reading it! I pretty much agree with all you said on how the game could be improved. I guess it's better to be a creator aware of your faults than denying they exist. One of the running through lines of the games is actually supposed to be about how Mikey and Krysten's relationship is crumbling and specifically how Mikey is being left behind in a way but I definitely need to put more focus onto it.
This part may be obvious but I didn't originally intend to make this a three part release and I would not make all the choices I did if I knew what my limits were going to be from the outset (Whoops I can't write 30K in six weeks). My least favorite thing about the game is that the characters don't change enough to make this first act feel compelling enough on it's own. I have some dramatic ideas for the end of part 2 and especially 3. There's also just things I found out when making the game. A small example is fell in love with the art for Pam I think she's really cute and evocative but by the time we finalized the art there was just no time to give her more screen time or lines (there probably won't be much of a chance for it in the next two parts either).
- Elena