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The first build was a great kick starter for a VN. 

The characters were fairly well-written and each has their own unique personality.

Moreover, what I like the most is Zeke and Scott's personality due to their background, their attitude, and style of communicating.

The MC's internal thoughts are quite enjoyable to know, especially during one of the talk with Scott. I certainly liked that part.

While it was a good start, on my POV, there is room for improvement when it comes to writing. I think the word "I" was overused in some parts like when the MC goes inside the bathroom/comfort room. Grammars and sentence structuring also have some small errors but not that noticeable.

I think that's all. Waiting for the next build already~~~

-XSC

Call me weird but is it possible to have Dante (Derrick's bodyguard) as another route???😭

Idk. He looks nice.

Nah it's alright, but I get what you mean though.

This is actually a necessary implementation for me because I read books/VNs in a narrative voice😅

I waited a whole damn minute to release my fingers on that part🫠🫠🫠

Based on the entirety of the apology, from my perspective, and from the past comments in this VN regarding the matter—It's safe to assume that you have taken full accountability, for now.

I don't mean to patronize or speak for everyone but from an objective standpoint, both parties committed an obvious fault.

On my perspective, I wouldn't hide my disdain nor my disappointment towards you and the other party for failing to recognize those questionable behaviors. I understand that while you're assumptions can be objectively justifiable on some ends, mistakes are always inevitable.

I can also resonate with you on the account of difficulty in having a long lasting friendships. While that's justifiable, the other half is unjust due to the simple fact that your character is not an excuse for doing uncouth behaviors and actions. Yes, I understand that having an undeveloped background may result in a poor social development.

Lastly, I do not intend to hope for an abrupt change as it may cause both external and internal issues for you. I do not condone the behaviors you've done in the past but I am willing to support this project. With all of that, I am looking forward to seeing you change for the future, especially for your personal project.

- XSC

Wait, what now?

Damn...

I should be offended but laughed instead. This is literally me in a nutshell 😂

"I don't even like you."

*proceeds anyway 🤣🤣🤣

So far so good. The starting point is decent. The prideful personality of the wolf is achieved. However, the magic system can be further defined or at least that's what I think. I'm looking forward to reading the upcoming chapters!

On the technical stuff, since I use an android, I did not encounter any problems so far.

I miss Wolf already...(forgot his name🥲)

Okay, Ima read it again

Clarence just let me hug and cuddle with you!!!😩

This update is, I think, one of the biggest yet.

So far so good.

[POTENTIAL SPOILERS]

I've had my suspicion for a while due to Lawrence's inconsistencies... But I guess he is. A. Traitor.

For the developers,

if possible, wouldn't it be nice to have a route for Asmund and Rasmus? Please, I, no, many of us would be delighted if that would come true.

It's almost been a year now and I gotta say I'm a little concerned.

😭😭😭

Damn I'm lined up towards Markus!

Thanks to this VN, I now have mixed emotions between the Devil of Rannai and Cadgan.🙃

But the experience is peak!

A little sus now are we?

Just here to disturb y'all!

I mean, Brut and Calbex is fine, minus Brut being a total ass at first.

The story is quite good, but I have to admit the emotional breakdowns are a bit over embedded.

Anyways, it's a good start and I definitely want to see more on the upcoming updates.

XX

Once again, I plead for thy knowledge for which I may download these enchanting music.

Where can I download the OST of this game? Please?

I'm flattered.

Is it possible to download the soundtracks? I really want it😖

Still patiently waiting ;⁠)

What...?