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i REALLY hope the art style is not a placeholder because this is unironically the cutest vn i've read in a while

sweet little vn. i love how much of a hater dominik is. old man's just FED UP with people's shit

as for feedback, the final illustration had dominik hidden behind the text box. you could've moved the entire picture up to show both martin and dominik and get rid of that wasted space above martin's head. but other than that everything's sweet

edit cause i thought up some additional feedback, this time for the writing: the pacing was excellent for most of the story but the final musings between dominik and martin felt really abrupt. they could've used some more screen time

why does riley see the figures of both eliza, his archnemesis, and graham, his recent fuckbuddy, in the glass in one of the screenshots? do they hold the same net significance to him? should i kill myself?