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The art is absolutely gorgeous and I feel the game has great bones but agree with a previous commenter that the constant spelling and grammatical errors, especially inconsistencies in punctuation and capitalization, significantly break the flow and immersion. Outside of that, I still found the prose and overall storytelling to be a bit clunky and juvenile. Overall, great potential.

I absolutely will! <3 I can see your inspiration but most importantly I can see where you've deviated and improved upon the concept. Super creative, super pretty, and I very much look forward to it!

I'm so excited for this! Looks lovely, I'm a fellow OL:B&A stan and love everything about your premise and what you have out so far! Marsh and Jade are both adorable and I love the customization. The best I've ever seen, truly. And the art! 10/10.