This was an unironically good visual novel. And I normally don't like VNs that much.
It had the right mix of everything in my opinion. It was meta at times, could be funny (it did actually make me laugh out loud multiple times) and had the ability to be somewhat serious at times. In addition to that the characters felt real, with multiple character traits, not being based completely on a single little trait. No character acted completely out of line from what I expected (although i almost only watch clips form some the featured VTubers).
I also liked the visuals a lot more than they were (probably) intended. It was barebones, but the Sprites, that were there felt alive when animated. It also lead to the texts being more decriptive, and the player having to use a little bit of imagination without having to use too much. I especially enjoyed the smutty scenes, because they were so well written.
Now to explain, what really gripped me, while playing, let me tell a story(Spoilers ahead): I just downloaded the game and was in a realy shitpost-ich mood. I saw the choice about Pomu's contract. i thought "What is the worst that could happen? Why not!" And the game just went on as usual. Heck i even forgot about that contract. And then I got my first ending with Elira (btw, I really tried finding the song that played there, would you mind posting a link to it/a playlist with the Soudntrack? I would appreciate it) and I found the first part of the Epilog to be rather sweet. That was until Pomu showed up. And when she mentioned the contract, it all came back to me. Never did I regret a single choice in a VN so much, such as this. And it also scarred me for life. I cannot look at Pomu the same way now...
What I'm trying to say is... this Game somehow awakened a special feeling in me, that I cannot really explain, but it's a good one!
I didn't see all endings yet, but I for some reason decided to try to get all achievements. I'm not quite there yet (Especially Elira Max Love) but I will keep trying!
Speaking of which: would you be comfortable with me releasing some sort "Ultimate guide" for the "All LINEs" and "Seduce all nine girls" achievments, when I get there?
I am definetely looking forward to more of your content, should you plan on releasing more. And if you do, I would appreciate more Characters (looking at you, Mika) although I don't know how much that would influence the development.
Anyways, did this change my opinion about Visual Novels? A little, yes. But did this intruduce me to someone who has great writing skills? Absolutely! Consider me a follower.