I am in wild delight and love for your creation. This game gave me better emotions for 3 hours of passing through all the endings and interesting dialogues. Thank you so much for creating such a masterpiece!
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Really smart choices of actions and actions of the character brought great pleasure - when our character is an ordinary person who just stuck his nose in the wrong things and just wants to go home and get an education. He can be both a real spy and a person who realized that he was not expected at the Academiya, and he no longer has a home. To understand that Fatui can give more and better than the Academiya, or to cooperate, believing the Academiya to the end.
I really like how well you felt Dottore. It is a character married to science and his work. A smart and cunning man. There are no direct dates with Dottore here, but it suits him perfectly. All he can give is a couple of gentle touches, a good attitude, and a little obsession. Perfect.
I was very glad to see Dottore from the manga - this little impatient teenager who just wants to open us (Ehehe, bonk from the wand, thanks even for such a development of events). What a charming fidget. Other segments, as well as the Ninth Harbinger, and other NPCs are also glad to see!
THE ENDINGS ARE THE BEST, AMAZING, OH TSARITSA , THIS IS THE BEST IN MY LIFE! I'm really crying out of love for this project. The plot, its forks, our answers to choose from - everything is great!
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Art, music: Music is very suitable, and the art is insanely beautiful! Both the backgrounds (I'm in love with them) and the characters themselves, a detailed drawing of all the details of the costumes of the same Prime, for example, is very hard work.
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Translation into russian: this is a really high-quality translation. Not a simple run through a translator, but a beautiful literary language that is pleasant and good to read. I love the same "Сгинь." from the mouth of Prime. I also saw a typo in russian somewhere in one word, but it's not scary at all!
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Technical part: I found one Traceback in the russian version - 1. File "game/tl/russian/script_visit.rpy", line 122, in the script and 2. File "renpy/common/00library.rpy", line 321, in say - Exception: '/i' closes a text tag that is not open.
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Thank you for your game! Good luck to you!