[very mild spoilers ahead!]
holy shit, this was incredible!!! you did such a fantastic job with giving each perspective so much detail and focus while still withholding JUST enough to make me need to read the next part as fast as possible. i love that it can be read in any order, but working my way up from christine to nat was so fun, the fact that they're all facing the same direction except nat is so perfectly symbiotic with the formatting of the story. getting the internal monologues for each character was always interesting and rewarding, you got into each of their mindsets so effectively--NONE of them felt flat at all, each one was so great at representing very specific and very prevalent behaviors/mentalities in women's sports and where exactly they stem from! i don't know how else to describe it, but it feels like it really creates its own weight, representing each of their fears so closely against each other--like the TERF paranoia just feeding further and further into itself against the very tangible threat present for the trans women around them, or the fear of social consequence versus the fear of outright violence, like, it feels like there's so much space for the story to really speak for itself, if that makes sense. sophia's perspective had to be my favorite out of all of them, her taking over the bow was SUCH a good moment every single time, especially from her angle! amazing work!!