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I've really quite enjoyed what you have so far. The ui is clean, well-margined and concise. Dialogue and additional prose is revealed in an inobtrusive organic way as a scene progresses The writing itself is quite well done as it doesn't seem to skimp or overfocus on any aspect - e.g. descriptions, exposition etc. Just the right amount of meat on its bones to push the action of the narrative along but still paint you the picture you need to see. The content of the preview as a whole echoes this for me. The game didn't force me to spend time grinding only to be treated to half-finished quests, dead paths, or placeholder text. It gave me just enough of a preview of - while of course a small amount - actually complete content. What is here and the framework laid so far has me quite eager to see what comes next.