I LITERALLY PLAY HSR AND LOVE NAT TO BITS AND IT STILL TOOK ME WAY TOO LONG TO GET THE REFERENCE IM DYING 馃槶
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This game is AMAZING, likely one of the best ive seen in a long time. The characters are charming and I love their interactions with each other. Especially the banter; all the lines are heccin hilarious ("You will not shackle me with your completely fair laws!!!!"). I also really like the chibi CGs that make transitions feel interesting. I'm excited to see the other routes and where the story will go. If I were made to offer a criticism, then I wish it would take some time to foreshadow and set things up a little more. I'm probably just being an idiot and missing some things, but for example, when Aiden revealed that he has a clone of himself, it felt a bit like it came out of left field (not that it ultimately bothered me). As a suggestion, sprinkling more obvious clues throughout the route such as having someone ask "how are you in two places at once" to make the reader more suspicious or making it more reasonable that he's capable of creating a clone by having him go into greater detail with his powers can help make it seem less random. Overall, however, this game is EASILY a 9/10 and I love what you've made so far! I can't wait for the next build