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ooooh ok that's really helpful.  tysm for the help!

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Im at the part where you question Zalthorion after retrieving the orb; I could swear managed to "pass" the encounter successfully when I played before the update came out, with Ranga saying something along the lines of me doing well. But I forgot to save like an idiot and now that I'm redoing it, I can't figure out what the right string of questions to ask was (even after mapping out each combination with pen and paper). What's the right combination of questions? Is there even one of do they all fail regardless? Am I going crazy?

Yes! So glad to see everyone is back and okay! I can't wait for the next chapter

Ah ok. I am playing the public version and I assumed it was a story update

I tried to install the new update and it didn't work, so I deleted and reinstalled it. It launched, but it won't go to any new story content; it just keeps showing the same "feel free to save here" message that was there before. I'm on android

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This game is AMAZING, likely one of the best ive seen in a long time. The characters are charming and I love their interactions with each other. Especially the banter; all the lines are heccin hilarious ("You will not shackle me with your completely fair laws!!!!"). I also really like the chibi CGs that make transitions feel interesting. I'm excited to see the other routes and where the story will go. If I were made to offer a criticism, then I wish it would take some time to foreshadow and set things up a little more. I'm probably just being an idiot and missing some things, but for example, when Aiden revealed that he has a clone of himself, it felt a bit like it came out of left field (not that it ultimately bothered me). As a suggestion, sprinkling more obvious clues throughout the route such as having someone ask "how are you in two places at once" to make the reader more suspicious or making it more reasonable that he's capable of creating a clone by having him go into greater detail with his powers can help make it seem less random. Overall, however, this game is EASILY a 9/10 and I love what you've made so far! I can't wait for the next build

I know this is true for not just me when i say this: "I'm here to replay this for the 3rd time"

Just because a VN no longer has choices doesn't mean its bad. Its true that the ability to influence the story has its appeal, but the story itself isn't diminished by making it fully linear. Imo, I think the game is still very enjoyable regardless

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