I'm glad that my feedback is helpful. And i really appreciate that you decide to change, it's not easy seems you've written it. I won't force you so, take your time, it always takes time to do something. I believe you'll solve the problem you're facing. And i sincerely hope your vn will be better and better♥
I don't mean to criticize，just wanna talk about the feelings after i played this vn(not all the routes,just two of them,Tiger and Darius)
From the point of view of the characters，Tiger K.O. the others with no doubt,an extra day story help his sharp personality stand out. And some others are just like, we met，oh, I'll invite you for something. That's kinda weird……
And the dialogue is a little……idealistic？At least for me. I felt that from Darius route,when i saw the conversation between MC and Darius in the cafe,i was like:what??? But this vn has great potential, i hope it to be better and it has the potential to be.
(I'm really sorry if I'm being mean, just wanna give you some feedback, or maybe you don't want it… Hope i won't bother you or something. And please forget about my bad grammar and words,I'm a Chinese after all，i tried.)
