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Good game and story line, no MC lore, so maybe expand on that for later projects, other than that, good job! c:

Great progression, A bit.. confusing, no real lore or explanation.. other than that.. great job :D

silly fart xd

ts cracked me up

love the drawn images...

5/5 story and comedic jabs

well done <3

Very cool concept, also what a terrible place to live, I hate being hot 0/5

joking, Nice use of the text movements, colours and images. you did really well.

Maybe expand on the lore of the burning town? maybe read a newspaper while eating breakfast or expand on what we do outside our house.

THERE IS 5 ENDINGS, WHICH WAY DID YOU GO!!!!?!?!! 

XD

The cat thumbnail says i need to give this 5/5

i wont though

The story is pretty linear, also I can't explore the houses, the link doesn't work, rah..

pls fix and then i can praise you for being amazing :D

Paths aren't finished, and thats okay! :D

well done on the parts you've done already :P

Truly an amazing superhero story...

good progression and keeping me interested.

Not sure on what to give feedback on XD

well done :D

Bugged, but thats just because of typos. You can fix them though, I believe in you, Good effort :D

Good story concept, but could use more depth, or more choices on top of choices also photos!

great job though <3

Short and unfinished, but has protentional, great job with the photos <3

spooky made me shiver in the bed

4/5

nice cool short story, maybe more alternative paths.

Nicely made 2 levels, not too much challenge so i'd probably focus on new enemies, but still cool, well done <3

Nicely drawn, great progression of enemy types, However I feel like you could've split the map into different layers so you wouldn't need to restart from the beginning when dying near the end.

Love the background detail, Could've done with more layers, but for level 1, well done! :D

Its a bit difficult to see the platforms..
I like the idea of propulsion via run up.
Overall good, but the fact i can barely see the platforms is a bit annoying lol XD

no ending page? :c
Good work anyway! probably could've done with more layers. :P

Make sure you add a killbox under the map always, so if someone finds their way outside the map, the game restarts. Other than that, well done <3