Loved this experience. Felt like an incredible use of this medium to tell a really personal emotional experience. The text coming from everywhere can constantly breaking its own rules felt much like the feeling that you're not in control. Powerful.
Just wanted to say: absolutely love your work and Johnny Mnemonic is my passion, a lifestyle and i'm glad to hear that someone else is obsessed with it as much as I am.
I just started too :) I usually just write linear and was afraid of anything code adjacent but there's just so many cool possibilities with Twine. I hope they end up streaming your game!!!!
I do that too!!!!!! ahaha I'm sure i'm going to miss one and it'll end up in my thing too. I right now am making them positive affirmations, so if I forget about them I can come back and while I left in a mistake, I get a little compliment too. I could tell that you spent a lot of time on things, there are so many great details. I'm making struggling with the art in my game right now too. I'm a quick writer but....not a natural artist at all, but playing your game made me really realize how much cooler it can make things.
I've reached a point in chapter ten where the page ends "I could feel it though. The gentle pulse in my hand. The life it was trying so hard to be. It was unfair. Why was it that it didn’t get to live? Who decided that it had to brighten the world but not roam its streets? Why was it that there were people born in this life to responsibility while everyone else got to walk around uncaring, naive to the horrors of the darkest corners. Safe because the light protected them.
I felt a tear slip down my cheek as the light died.
It had only wanted to live. Just once."
Any color I pick it ends on this page, and there are no options forward. Is it a bug or did I make a mistake? I've been playing this game for a long time, just bought it, and almost immediately ran into this bug.
