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I love the art and the concept! My only problem is how fast the player moves and how much it slides around. It makes it very hard to get onto the small platforms and I accidentally launched myself off the edge a few times lol. Checkpoints could also be helpful! Or maybe let you keep the gems you got even if you die. Other than that, great job!

The art and concept is really cute! My only problem is with how fast you can get with the arrow keys, it makes it hard to try and stay a steady speed but that may be the point lol. Great job!

I love the premise of the game and the level design. The colors and textures you used made it feel really ominous and creepy. It did take me a bit to realize that you're supposed to pass through the black barriers so I think that could be more clear. 

I'm impressed by how many levels you got done! The player and enemy designs are so cute and I love how you integrated the enemies into the game. My only problem was with the gravity mechanics. Trying to get on the small platforms is very hard since the player slides around a lot. Other than that its a really fun game!

This game is so fleshed out for only having a few weeks! the level and character design is great. I'd say it would help if the level had checkpoints since its so long. Double jumping would also be helpful, especially to get over the tall skinny barrier. I ended up jumping to my death a few times because of that one. Other than that, amazing job! :3

-the writing is very well done!

-i enjoy the text customization, but the foggy transition between each passage hurts my eyes a little bit. maybe shorten the duration if possible?

-how many endings are there? it seems like they're all very similar but there could be a 'good' ending i just can't find