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Bugs 

I can't Die when I fall of the map. The jumps does not  go high enough, if you where adding double jump later on  then ignore.  

Strengths 

The Idea fun of hiding fun from the radar and the cover systems is nice. 

Weaknesses

Basically what I said in the bugs section of the critique 

Changes or Improvements 

I think if you have time add a hit box to the swan so that the frog isn't just hiding from said swan. Add a higher jump height or double jump. make it so you die when you fall off.  

Bugs 

No bugs I have notice at the moment. 

Strengths

Very strong game giving you options and a challenge with the lives if your playing in physics mode

Weaknesses 

At the moment your weakest part would be how slow the game is. 

Changes or Improvements 

The only thing I suggest is adding in a power up that increase the pace of the game. if you haven't already. 

Bugs 

No bugs Noticed 

Strengths

Very fun and simple to play. 

Weaknesses 

Some of the jumps are hard to jump like I could not reach the platform. They also feel slow and sluggish like a snail., 

Changes or Improvements 

just work on the jumps features, they no bugs that I notice but the jumps do feel slow and sluggishs 

Bugs 

No bugs that are noticed 

Strengths 

Very fun game enjoy flying the space ship. Very nice boost added as well

Weaknesses

The stars can be a bit Nauseating when playing, and did strain my eyes a bit.  

Changes or Improvements 

at the moment The only thing I recommend changing is the background stars but I wouldn't because of how close the deadline is.. 

Bugs 

The are some, bugs set in the game but not noticeable till you play, so you can possibly get away with it.  

Strengths 

The game was fun jump mechanics are some of the best.  This game is also visualising appealing

Weaknesses 

Other than the bugs not much. don't know what the darks hearts are for so might need to explain that. 

Changes or Improvements 

I would try if you have time fix the bugs but as I said they no noticeable so you can possibly get away with it. 

Bugs 

Bugs the only bug i saw was the Heath bug where I had full health but go intsa skilled by spikes 

Strengths 

The art style 10/10. The movement is really fun to play as well. The upgrade system is fun as well unlocking a double jump feature. 

Weaknesses 

The bug I would say is the only things. I would also say the writing have no Idea half of what you wrote. 

Changes or Improvements 

Possibly add fall damage to the game making harder. adding health bonus. Try and fix that bug. 

Bugs

it terms of bugs I had a problem with the start screen, when I pressed enter it would not let me enter the game till I mash the buttons.

Strengths

It style very nice and appealing. Very anime 

What are the best parts of the game? 

Best parts is the movement. just love the fact the character dancing 

Weaknesses 

so far I was very confused on what going on the stars are also not very clear to see so it was hard to know where what. 

Changes or Improvements 

I only thing I suggest is trying making the stars a bit clearer because they are a bit hard to see.  I also check the direction you going in for the game because I have no Idea on where to go.