Nice work, I'm way too tired to give a proper long review, but for a first attempt this was pretty impressive! Some things I would say could be tweaked, like the dialogue box could be a bit more stylish considering how good the rest looks. The choices also obviously should be more than a coinflip when you do a longer game, but makes sense for a short project like this. The dialogue was charming and fairly well written, and although a bit cliche of course, it was pretty convincing. It's hard to strike the balance between believability and convenience for a thing like this (especially since most of your audience, not to be rude, will likely not understand that sometimes bar flings can go even faster and more outlandish than this.) but this game pulled it off pretty well.
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I'm still in there, but from the moment I joined the mods were being fucking assholes and it left a bad taste in my mouth, so I haven't really looked in there since the first day back around when the last update came out. Enjoyed the game, and really liking the comic so far! Keep up the good work Carpetwurm, sorry all this shit happened around this game.
Had this sitting in my library for a while, waiting for a time I was in the mood to tackle a text based game, let alone a lewd one. Man do I regret waiting on this. I'm normally not someone who would consider themselves submissive or even into this kind of goading, petplay type thing. But honestly it's so well written I didn't even care, I was both interested just to see where it went next, and also just how much hotter it would get. Very impressive work!