It was alright. I went through all ends pretty damn fast but they were all kind of the same. The storytelling needs more deception to the reader. Its way to straight forward for a horror visual novel. Its very easy to notice what will happen and choices feel more obvious than vague like they should be. The art style is great though very cute. In the story with the gym/cat girl a small spelling mistake where viryse will say "Sports club sctivites are cancelled every month." incase you didn't know. Good job on the visual novel so far.
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