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I like the daughter raising simulation idea. 

The illustrations that go with it are nice and I must be very dumb in not even knowing how to pass the first year. I think informing players to know beforehand what the requirements are to pass the first year would be nice as it will help us understand what we need to focus on. But I really like the concept!

I like the part where I had to do math. 

Your storytelling was very descriptive and there were some fun paths to take.  I think you could've incorporated more colored text if the stalker/killer was speaking so you know that he's a threat.

Very comedic. I like the ending comments and it makes me wish I could see some drawings or illustrations in it to help further visualize what's going on.

But it was overall a funny silly game :D

An interesting loop game! I was immersed in the way of how interactive some of the words are like how it says "grab it" and it shakes. Or if some words are glowy. It does make it seem like the Narrator is a God or something.

I think for the revive feather, it seems rather pointless to have if it since you go back to the beginning rather than revive at the place you died, it just seems like another restart. 

But overall, I enjoyed the short game! :D

Fun to see the other options/choices