what a good read !! the characterisation of Ray was done so well, and I really loved the dichotomy between both Ray and Norman (just as much as they did for the manga/first season of TPN too!)
the introduction of the single pages, with just Ray and the text?? it shook me beyond words
i love ur art and the way you weave your stories in ur comics <3 thanks for making this
a great, short read! i loved the way the panels seemed to drop and flow into each other, and i could really feel how the little ghost boy felt :)) the part leading up to the ending rly GOT me omgg
it was a great read, with fantastic art and a story that didnt leave me hangin :)) thanks for making this !!
nice! The game caught my eye on Tumblr, and I'd just finished the webcomic up to the latest page too :D
I loved the smooth animations on all the characters (lookin' real close at Kazu's little flinch at Pandora's stomping, and Hitomi's blush), and the lighting and music fit very well, especially when the music faded in and out around Nemo. A little nitpick I would have would be the lack of an interact button, but it was kinda funny to step on all the characters to get them to talk anyway >:)
Overall, it was a fun, short play!
