Hi, thank you so much for the review! I didn't have time to playtest the typewriter effect's timing, so the feedback is definitely welcome :) For the first part, Marianne's story comes from personal experience—I was also a weird child (as most of us in writing were, I would assume lol). I realized a bit too late that I shouldn't have made it quite as personal, so I apologize if that affected your experience with this short story!
Thanks again for the feedback.