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Hi!

I’m Cknkbab, I noticed your game and wanted to reach out

I do official story writing, dialogue writing, story progression, beta testing, and a tiny bit of poster art for games

I’ve had the opportunity to work with some great people, and I know lots of people who would be able to help on your games too.

with this said and done, I just wanted to ask if in the future you’d need any of my services completely free of charge

If you’d send me your discord id be able to talk to you there too!

thanks!

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I CANT WAIT 

This game was well crafted; however, I noticed some issues. As a quasi-professional curator/reviewer, I must say this game was rather intriguing and fun. The jumpscare was good and certainly gave me a fright. I liked how we don’t know who or how the man was there.

My takeaways here are bugs. 

At the start, if you take the broom and use it on the storage room, then click the door quickly, you’ll be glitched out but still be mopping it. This doesn’t affect any gameplay but is a minor bug that could affect some other parts of the game.

To put the mop away, the player has to crouch. The crouch makes sense, only a small part in the description saying you had to crouch with some items made it slightly confusing.

At some points, there was an indication the player could interact with some items in my crosshair, although they couldn’t.

These three bugs did detract from the experience but only partly. For a one-euro F2F style game, this is definitely a great experience. A short game that gives you the same fright as a full three-hour one. 

My verdict: I recommend this game, just be aware of some of the smaller bugs (even if they don’t affect much)

Keep it up!