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It was a very good read. Unexpectedly good and you improved a lot since your last game. What I didn't like was the random flirting and the pointless sex scenes. 8.5/10. The game started off pretty strong and it intrigued me a lot. It was one of the very few recently released VNs that did hook me from the beginning to the end while not getting boring for a single second. The banter in between the more important scenes felt very natural and good, I liked the dynamic between the two lovers and it felt very complete thanks to the good soundtrack. I assume you also drew the art for it, which felt mostly fine except for the jaws. Jaws do not open like that XD. I'd like a rerelease with the jaws fixed or a very small revamp of the sprites if possible. The other gripe I have is not your writing but your predictability. I could tell what was about to happen next almost 75% of the time but it felt funny that I was able to. A lot of good themes are explored and I am quite happy with the final product and I can't wait to see what else you are cooking now, if you plan on releasing more. Cheers