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Just finished She Shines. Awesome. The last two were great too but the emotional core in this one really hits you. I was invested in Emi pretty much immediately and it pays off. Also, I liked the fight in the garage, it's hard, at least for me, to put together an action scene that hits hard and is still easy to follow, but you nailed it. So good. Consider me a fan. 

Loved this even more than the first 👍👍

Great, great stuff! Thank you for sharing this

I loved this! The way you built the scene, with the action in the background and up front, and the dialogue was so fun to read. Vampire characters are cool as hell in the first place but it's nice to see one using her immortality to bring change as opposed to just hanging around in the dark for thousands of years. 

I loved this. One thing that really stood out to me was Inquisitor Freja's discomfort around the body. Those little details added so much to her character and I would love to read another work featuring her.

I really liked this. You had a line in there where Dracula made comment on his immortality and how it can make long stretches of time feel like moments to him. It really got me thinking of the implications of that. It definitely seemed to play a role in his downfall here. Anyway, really enjoyable story.