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What a cute "monster". :D

Very cute!

The art looks gorgeous and the story sounds interesting. I want to read it but to be honest from the screenshots it looks hard to read with the coloured fonts you have chosen. I also think the nvl screen is a bit too dark so we can't see the pretty art behind it very well. 

Also some of the text looks off centre like in the second last screenshot. The two sentences at the end. I realise it has a voice acting but I still think the presentation of the writing is important especially if it's going to take up most of the screen with nvl mode. 

I thought I'd leave a comment to let you know so you can maybe have a chance to fix it and make it easier on the eyes to read. It looks like a lot of people put a lot of work into it so it would be sad to see it go unnoticed. Sorry if this comes across as rude. I'm not trying to be. 

No worries! I'm just the type of person that doesn't like playing mini games in visual novels to be honest. I'm sure some people enjoy them though! :)

This was lovely! I'll admit at first I was put off by the puzzles but once I got into it I enjoyed the experience. Reading their little moments together was nice and the illustration was so beautiful. Great work! <3

Very cute game with cute art. :)

Lumen is cute and I like the little animation for his sprite. Very nice art and an interesting situation. I managed to get two endings. I like the ending where (spoiler) we escape together the most. Good work! :)

And that sucks...

In all seriousness, I really liked this! The poem was nice and the visuals are pretty. Good job. :D

He's so pretty. <3

I really like the design of the Mirror character. She's pretty! This was an interesting little story. Good job! :)