Hey, I just wanted to say good job on the VN it's great, but I did want to bring up one small inconsistency that made it's way into issue 1.
VERY MINOR SPOILER BELOW
When you first meet Milo his sprite has a scar over his right eye, but in the very last scene with Milo and Raoul in the doorway his eye doesn't have a scar on it at all.
Edit: The eye his scar is on actually seems to change depending on the direction he's facing.
I.E.: when he faces the right side of the screen it's on his left, but when he faces the left side of the screen it's on his right.