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I enjoyed the interplay between the characters. I do struggle a bit with a captain making that kind of decision, but the space was limited to explore the transition in thinking. Overall, well done!

I loved the tone as a Lovecraft and darker content fan. The protagonist's descent was well written, too. Very tight space for the story, but I struggle a bit with an Inquisition investigator effectively publishing their plans to the Inquisition. Well done, though!

I really liked the story and the Dwarven ideology throughout. The literal use of "creative resources" twice was a bit heavy handed, though.

NicelyI appreciated the "vet talk" with the newer soldier. You captured the vibe well.

A fellow First Teamer! I was with 2/5 Cav during Desert Storm.

The journal format was great. I liked the fun you brought to this!

As a Havoc Brothers player, I wanted to enjoy this more than I did. The dialog was difficult to follow without cues to who said what. I appreciate the effort!

I appreciated the work and the interactions. But, I would have liked to know some more about Snik's reason for being there in the first place.

Nicely done. Takes "bibliophile" to a whole 'nother level. 

As someone who lived through the "Real American Hero" episodes on TV, I can appreciate the reference. Stims, baby!!

Jaxxon was certainly driven to make an impression on the occupying Blessed Sisters! I enjoyed the tone and the ending was "nice" and bleak.