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This is the best thing I've ever seen!!! Super congratulations 🤩 Can you advice me on learning to use twine so good? Any particular tutorial or site other than the one they have. I have enjoyed this so much!! Thanks for sharing 🙂

I enjoyed your story! You made a good use of images and multimedia resources, you also were able to change the background colour and add this box to put in comments, such a good idea!! 

Some suggestions:
Be careful with the colours you choose to use, this orange colour on the blue background is difficult to read. Be mindful of contrast when making these decisions. 

Also there is a point in your stroy where you can't do anything more, one feels a bit like the story crashed, it is not clear that the story came to a natural end. In fact I still don't know. 

Overall you are daring and I love the fact you tryout things. THat is what this all is about. 

WELL DONE!!