I meant to say "I mean, yeah! The breaks would help! And also separating dialogues from descriptions!"
Sry bout the typo. English hard.
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I mean, yeah! The breaks would help! And separate dialogues from descriptions! Its a lot easier (and nicer on the eyes) reading this:
"Aw, ow"
Dylan moans as he fell, looking at his knee.
"Oh, no!"
Blood started gushing from his now cut kneecap.
Rather than:
"Aw, ow" Dylan moans as he fell, looking at his knee. "Oh, no!"Blood started gushing from his now cut kneecap.
Anyways, I wasn´t talking about the hundreds of reactions the first two characters have; I was pointing out that the first characters only have dialogue, and that, instead, the newer ones have dialogue mixed with reactions and descriptions of the scene. Separating the texts in different dialogue boxes so that the player can skip to the next when they finish reading would be a lot more comfortable and easy to read, as it would feel more in line with what a game should look like, rather than looking like a text RPG with some images (noice artwork btw).
I loved the addition of new girls, and the conversations between them! One thing I like more about the first version rather than this update, is that there is SO MUCH TO READ. Don´t get me wrong. The more info on the characters and their interactions the better, but i´d be lying if I said that I prefer the long paragraphs of text the characters have while doing it, rather than the much shorter, much more personalized reaction dialogues! Just check the dialogues of the first two characters that were added when they have sex, and compare it to the new ones. While the old ones have a lot more charisma and uniqueness, the new ones blend all-together in a wall of text of dialogue mixed with descriptions (either write dialogues or write descriptions!). Good update tho, keep it comin! I know I am... (that was a joke. Kinda.)