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Burrskii
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This is amazing. I can already tell I'm going to love this. 🥰 I'm newish to the furry community and didn't know what a gnoll was but I feel at home as my oc/sona is hyena. I can't wait for more!
Also poor tav, he was trying to be as nice as possible all things considered. I'd feel exactly the same way as MC.
Amazing read I love what you have done so far. Am I right in assuming the main character is mainly a top? regardless I'm extremely surprised and pleased with the 2 current options making me believe that he is. I don't think there's a single character you've created that I don't like so far I'm excited to see everything you have to offer here.
I reread the part I was thinking of.
so it was right before they cuddle in bed I guess a couple weeks went by where they didn't really interact at all, it felt a bit fast for them to suddenly just sleep in the same bed. I wish they had some sort of interaction prior during the day Maybe they finally got a chance to hang out again ya know?
I kind of felt the same way when he got with atlas they apparently never interact much anymore to just suddenly hooking up. Some build up like them interacting and hanging out again prior for a few days with a little tension would be nice.
You said it's not a romance novel but two instances of romance that seem to add major plot points to the story have happened and they felt a bit sudden or rushed leading up to the instances.
But fr it's not really a big deal and I still love what you have so far :)
Dave day 2..... Wtf why didn't itch notify me 😤... also I didn't even know patreon had an update or I would have paid for it early ☹️ You should post on here when patreon gets updates! it really is a shame I can't follow on patreon and receive a notification when there's new major updates for me to resubscribe to.