I died at the end 😂
absolutely perfect. I love the individualism in the characters. And the end was the best
I realized the same thing after posting. The last paragraph was ment to be Jerome’s internal dialog so I should have at least italicized it. I really appreciate the feedback.
Thank you! I’d been looking for my problem words, but not having an editor made it difficult. I’ll work on it. Thank you again
Would love to find out what he does with the souls. And how he got in the situation.
