LOVED this demo, played it on stream. However I do have a few things I noticed that could be improved upon. There are a lot of grammatical errors in the dialog text, having more editors go through to check and correct these would help improve the experience. I also feel like there is a bit too much rambling/monologuing from Jestyn. I would cut some of his speeches down by half honestly. love him but the rambling is a bit too long.
Very keen to see more of this game and see where it goes. I will for sure play the full version on stream when it's out.
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