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sorry didn't mean for it to sound like that it's your game after all and you can do what you want with it

I have and I went into the mall a bit and haven't gotten far but I plan on continuing soon

a thing I forgot to mention and just remembered is that you should make some alternate dialogues for some things 

there were some characters in the construction area that I only met after I beat the boss and they sounded like they knew me already which I assume is a continuation from if I talked before but it doesn't really make sense

what I say may sound harsh but I genuinely see potential in the game and want it to be better so I'm gonna say everything negative I have about it first

the jump is very clunky both too high and too floaty but I get it if you keep it by now cuz I assume you planned the game around it and it would be very hard to change

wall jump is very annoying to perform cuz you need to mash + I had trouble with jumping away from the wall

the enemies are just there to be there they aren't interesting at all (an exception is the dark red place and those are okay) and barely do anything from a combat perspective they were more annoyances than anything (includes the two bosses I got to I beat them both on the first try without any trouble)

charge up for the slash may be too long but if you plan on giving upgrades that shorten it then it's fine

the slash itself is too short you need to get extremely close to an enemy to hit them or you need to charge up which like I said is too long

while it's great that you have nonbinary characters you shouldn't have the pronouns of every character in the dialogue box it makes no sense from a story perspective that when the main character meets new people she already knows their pronouns + it interrupts immersion (this is just a bit annoying and I wouldn't actually care if it's changed or not just my piece of mind)

this only happened to me in the assist room but you need to make sure that the dialogue box stays on screen cuz when I was to the far left I couldn't read anything on it

now to the good parts

both the music and art are great

the ability to jump from a dash to get a further jump is great

the UI is very good (maybe make it possible to zoom on the map but not necessary

the story is interesting and I am engaged and want to know more

the secret shortcuts are great (I only found one but assume there's more)

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in fawns route there's a thing where you can endure with enough res is there a limit cuz I got to 17 (even though my res is supposed to be 20) and it still didn't do anything

thanks

where's ragash?

never mind the auto save fixed it

it won't let me load cuz it can't find the black bra while pregnant

Also what is the censored word with pixie?

How do I trigger the second marin event?

what is differenet then 0.14.2?

thanks

I still don't understand how to get the third scene with alissa what does it mean annoy her?

If it's the thing with her name I did it when I caught her and I did the other two but still got nothing

I played rinny and got the futa sex scene and the logbook still says get to know rinny I think I got everything is that a glitch or am I missing something (i'm on futa if that matters)

ps. can you enter the graveyard?