Do you have a discord to track any upcoming releases better, either art or vn?
bragbirch66
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Tales From the Underworld: Promise to Water the Flowers in my Apartment comments · Replied to bragbirch66 in Tales From the Underworld: Promise to Water the Flowers in my Apartment comments
Finished it! It was really fun to read, with great art and UI.
The only thing that goes against the project are very minor spelling mistakes (IE: ov er) and the heavy repetition of personal pronouns: I, he/his, you, and me; which, if anything, is practically splitting hairs. It's that good ^^
Edit: Still crying too. Thanks for making this.
Edit 2: Had to come back to this; it's honestly so rare for someone to get this specific brand of polyamory right. It's just so amazing to find someone like myself in media that's not cast in the lens of a freak, degenerate, or emotionally broken.
Tales From the Underworld: Promise to Water the Flowers in my Apartment comments · Posted in Tales From the Underworld: Promise to Water the Flowers in my Apartment comments
GOD. YOUR PROSE. AUGH.
I could say a lot of words about how good it is; prattle pathetically trying to grope for the right words ---- but hoooooly shit it makes the writer brain break down. How in the FUCK. DID YOU MAKE SUCH GOOD PROSE.
all the little allusions made are so cute and well fleshed out, all the hints are plain yet still unfold in a way that drives surprise in the audience, something something something, you're very good at what you do.
..but no seriously I write too and id very much like to know how.
I did not expect to have something of the strength of a Ray Bradbury novel when looking for (lovingly:) disgusting yuri "rape".