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Hey, just thought I'd say

 love what you're doing here. If you ever want to work with a game writer, it would be cool to do a collaboration. Keep doing what you're doing

Very beautiful! I'm a fan

I did it! Got to the end! That felt so much better

honest feeling is the build is very cool, but the controls and the inability to correct your mistakes at the last minute frustrated me

Good call.

Maybe... it was one of those things, a bit like you said in your update, of adding loads of stuff and making it messier rather than cleaner. The stuff about plants kind of cluttered it?

I'm not working on it now... it's tricky to add interactivity that feels deep, rather than just embellishing a linear story with a maze of wrong paths, which was what I was doing...

Quick question - I noticed you're looking at and responding to a lot of other games. That's something I want to do more, (rather than just working on own projects).

But there's so much on itch.io and I don't know where to start... where's a good place to start?

cheers

The intro made it feel very legit, like "this is real history" - but the option to skip it made it feel like it wasn't important, so I'll admit I skimmed 

which maybe was bad because then I was confused about the context

silly me

but it might be something to consider - how to make the opening as attractive as it could be, and ease/hook them in

(just some thoughts -) it had nice lines, made me really curious, and like the stuff about the skunk condoms and details like that gave it real character

Hey this is cool! Painted pictures, atmospheric