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God what a tragic in but I couldn't help hooting and hollering the whole time because it was an extremely bad ass tragedy. It feels like the only end that could come to morgan of red maw. This whole saga of morgan kicked so much ass I love it. God all the rain and the duel with falchion, I felt like I could feel the heat reading it. Its only fitting that the first rider dies and the 2nd rider has to carry on in her shadow. I can't say it enough, this whole story and saga rocked

Well worth the wait. Incredibly fun story. I love the relationship between kaya and morgan and the tension in the position they hold between eachother. Also loved morgan being what awakened the horizon to change herself. Excited for the finale and what the last kiss will be. 

I'm super happy how it turned out. I was expecting the doomed yuri but seeing her escape those depths of despair and team up with morgan RULED! like kaya is my favorite of the main trio honestly. And this whole story was just so emotional. When kaya said "you were never my enemy" I nearly cried it was great. I knew you'd write something great no matter what I was expecting

Also cause I can't not see some rider man in shrike I just realized her going out like that was like rider man with that frickin nuke 

WOW! I Just spent my whole day reading this story non stop and it makes me crazy how good it is. Over all these stories you've made it so easy to grow attached to these characters more and more and you make there relationships really come to lifen especially here! The way kaya and morgan reached such lows only to end up allying with eachother. Shrike final action in this story. And of course I love the poem you did for wyrmstonen it felt like a fight song for a showa rider. 

I just want you to know that the gordian cycle is one of my favorite things to read and I look forward to the stories that come next. Thank you for writing these. I love all the lesbianism and dog women and everything, truely such an amazing and indulgent story

I mean I don't want her to die but knowing that her death is being saved for the next story probably is like "ah fuck here comes more pain" which is of course exactly what I want haha

Great chapter! Love to see 3 lesbians kill the ultimate life form. The fact that this wasn't the end of kaya though :( the next stories gonna hurt. And I have a feeling this isn't the last we'll see of shrike. No one wants to adopt this dog girl anymore

Loved this one! Absolutly horrified by what might happen due to this change in power dynamic. Could feel a gut punch coming after she mentioned that leash a second time. so happy to see insane showa rider training sequences in this one too! It was giving me that v3 illness reading it. Can't wait to read what comes next!

Thank you for writing this story! You captured the euohoria of finding yourself so flammin well. And the final transformation sequence and role call gave me the chills like a good precure finale would. this book rocks

I'm a little confused by combat ranges. If someone declares they are in close range at the start of combat does that mean they are close range ti every single fighter or a specific fighter? Do you have to track your range according to each fighter? And how does moving ranges (like from medium to close) affect your range to ther fighters?

Edit: noticed empower uses the same description as adapt and summon seems to have some of empowers roll results copied to it instead of the actual roll results. Will add more edits if I find anything else :)

Edit 2: if I am reading the boons "speedster" and "kinetic charge" it seems like they basically do the same thing excepr speedster has the bonus of letting you do a main action as well. Also when it says "deal a 1/3 active harm attack" do you need to roll since it is an attack? Since that would be affected by resistances

Edit 3: for the modular boon it says you gain a special move slot without specifying if ita for a 1 cost or 3 cost special move

In the 1 cost special moves lumen nudge and lumen back dash may have their names switched

With the backlash draw back it says to take damage when you fail a roll. I assume that means any roles of 1-3 and not rolls of 4-5

For combo drawbacks does "volatility" do damage for each combo or just one damage when combo is gained?

And for ichor can you only spend max 1 combo for the benifit or can you spend multiple.

Edit: on the ally character sheet it has a box for unlocking the 3 cost effects but I don't see how to unlock that mentioned in the current rules. 

Sorry for the long comment

Thank you for writing this because it whips so hard! Seeing someone like morgan in a rider type role fills me with so much jot everytime I read onf of these tales. I can't wait to see what comes out next

If you are looking for the boon, drawbacks, and specials they are in the playtest docs part of the download page. If you find and click the fighter form creation kit it will have everything there

On page 29 in advancement I have a few questions

1. When it says the mentors has 2 special options, where ate those options listed?

2.when it says "change a -1 or 0 stat for a new background or training" does this mean change a background/training on those types of stats or to change the stats and also the background/training?