i really enjoyed this !! definitely vibed with it. i really loved how you shaped a sort of narrative across the different haiku / poems esp w the trains & the family (those ones were my favourites)
hi, I really love your poems, the imagery is so rich and wonderful in all of them. i especially love sappho for dickgirls, it's so detailed but simple too. I hope you keep writing because you have a wonderful voice !!
