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I've read through this and I'm finding it very compelling! The flavor is well-written and the bones of the game are clearly excellent.

Unfortunately, I'm finding actually playing it to be an exercise in frustration. It feels like every time I turn around, I have a question that either isn't answered by the text, isn't answered in the place I expect it, or has to be divined from implication by reading tangentially-related bits.

One of my first questions was "what is the value of a face card?" I assumed the answer was zero, causing some parts early in the game to be quite (enjoyably) tricky, but then I read the unicorn event, which says that the unicorn can give you "a Face Value reagent" -- so maybe J/Q/K are worth 11/12/13?

Some other questions were:

• Why would I ever make a potion wrong/design it to have too much poison? (There are consequences for this, but no discernable path to it since it seems to be worse to do these things than to just let the patient go entirely untreated and keep any reagents I've gathered.)
• How often do you harvest garden plots and how/when do you plant in them?
• How do I know what my Independant familiar finds? (it says to draw a card, but also says they don't trigger events, but the only other thing there seems to be to find is reagents, but those don't necessarily map cleanly to card values...)
• Do I have Forage points, a Forage value, or a Forage track? All of these terms are used -- are they interchangeable?
• The Museum of Magic event tells me to "tick the M box" whenever I send a reagent to the Museum. 😭 The what?
• Why is "rat spit" the reagent that gets a comment for its grossness when it's directly opposite from literal poop? (I appreciate the commitment to nonviolence but frankly I'd find it less offensive to just eat the frog!)

I found some of the gameplay a bit clunky -- shifting from the journal to scrap paper and back again, flipping back and forth through the book to find things, having to stop constantly early in the game to make up a character from nothing. While the game was incredibly fun once I got immersed into the story, the stop-and-start of it made it quite difficult to get to that flow state.

On a more "personal preference" note, I feel like the entire card-drawing mechanic is a bit underutilized. For example, most draws only care about the card's value (why prompt the player to flip a coin when you could reference the suit of the drawn card instead?) and there's no clear indication of when to shuffle the deck.

I also would have preferred a more discrete "setup" phase to the game -- perhaps being walked through a small introduction, with prompts to help create some villagers that we can use in ailments later.

Overall, a very worthwhile game to play, enjoy, and learn from, but if you ever consider a second edition, it could use some more thorough playtesting.

Notebook paper is the best character sheet for any game, but I'm glad my creations can be a suitable alternative!

Progress on printables has slowed significantly since my printer went belly-up last year. Unfortunately, at the moment I'm in the middle of moving and can't afford a new one, so it'll be some time before regular progress starts up again.

Aw man, I really want to use this class. It's got some great ideas and the flavor is really good. But.

As it is, most of my critique would be wording clarification/nitpicks (like: "expires" is not terminology used in Fabula; it should be "end/lose this effect"; or: Dedication and Knowledge should probably specify "your My Strength is Yours Skill" instead of just "the My Strength is Yours Skill" unless you want it to be technically possible to have a character being supported by one Squire give a benefit to a different Squire with one of these Heroic Skills) but I think there are some bigger issues as well.

I love the idea of being able to do more with Equipment actions, but Arming Maneuver needs some small but serious adjustments to not be absolutely bonkers broken (specify that you can only pick each option once, decide how it should interact with free Equipment actions, clarify "an ally" to "an ally you can see" if you want to avoid Navigator shenanigans, etc.) Twin Point Strike, meanwhile, is Entropist's Stolen Time plus Commander's Charging Cavalry with full damage on both attacks, whenever you perform the Equipment action -- even for a Heroic skill, that's going a bit far!

Which brings me to what I think is the biggest problem with this class: I think I can already do most of what it wants to do with some combination of Entropist, Commander, and Guardian, and I don't think rolling all of those things into one class is enough to justify adding it to my games, especially when those classes already harmonize so well. Combined with the Squire's extremely limited set of Heroics, I think this class commits the cardinal Fabula Ultima class-building sin of trying to be self-contained.

So what about Squire is mechanically unique? What about it adds something to other classes in the game rather than just combining things that already exist in order to streamline? For me, I think:

• Get a benefit when you use the Equipment action. Again, I love the idea of centering the Equipment action for cool effects, but we gotta keep in mind firstly that a character's inventory space in Fabula Ultima is practically unlimited, so it's a very powerful action to take! and secondly that there are a number of things in the game that grant an Equipment action for free. (Dancer's Quick Change and Entropist's Stolen Time are obvious, but there's also the Make It or Break It Heroic Skill from Techno Fantasy and a sample rare weapon Quality from the GM Toolkit that allow the possibility of taking a free Equipment action whenever you attack. If you can potentially spend 5 MP to get an attack whenever you attack, that is... not ideal.)
• Get a benefit when you cover an ally. I also really like this! Most of the enhancements you can get from Guarding only apply when you choose not to cover someone, so this, too, is an interesting niche to me!

I'm sure you understand a lot of the design intent better than I do, so I'm sure you can hit on more than those. I really recommend taking this class and considering how you could combine it with other classes in play to lean into particular archetypes.

I think there's some excellent ideas here, and I particularly like the work and polish you've put into it! I hope this feedback is useful and you'll continue to work on this class! :D

(Edit: what on Earth is happening to the word wrapping in this text box...?)

I can't seem to get these to import into Hex Kit without some kind of misalignment. They look fine in the import dialogue and I'm able to adjust the tile so that the yellow line is on the line, but when using them in the editor, the tiles are too wide and there's either overlap or a gap, as if the tiles are too wide.

Edit: After banging my head against this for a while, the problem seems to be that some of the assets are not square. I assume these are not tiles at all, but rather are meant to be used with your other utilities for customizing tiles. (For context, Hex Kit's default tileset comes with empty borders as the base for a new map, so it didn't seem strange to me at all that empty borders would be a tile of their own.)

Thank you very much, that's a huge help! 💙

Hello! I bought your beautiful tiles in the hopes of using them with Hexkit. Do you happen to have a guide somewhere for this?

I'm grateful to have so many options for changing and customizing the tiles, but since I just want to use them simply, all the different folders are a little overwhelming for me.

Thank you for any help.

Added a link to the card gallery!

Updated the card lists!

Thank you! :D

• Fillable forms, so that item descriptions can be typed up and added to the PDF before printing.
• Maybe nanDECK files instead of fillable PDFs? I just have not had luck with these PDF forms. D:
• Instructions illustrations.

I think for now, my priority is on items that are "usable" -- stuff that's normally on your character sheet on a temporary basis, but which needs to be tracked and has rules attached. Eventually I'd like to move on to neat artifacts and treasures. If there are specific items you'd really like to see, please let me know! A gallery of all the finished items is on my website, updated as they're finished.

Set 1: Alchemist's Shop

Focusing on consumables, mostly.

Set 2: General Store

Stuff every adventurer needs. It'd be cool to one day do variations on this set for different character themes. Generic supplies first, but then maybe different themes for different cultures or biomes.

Set 3: Loot Table

Valuables and trade goods for selling, macguffins and "key items" to solve puzzles, and monster loot to collect for quests or even for use in crafting. This is another set that might be cool to re-theme for different dungeons or biomes.

Once these are done, I'd like to move on to basic weapons and armor, and then eventually on to fancy magical/artifact weapons and armor! :D