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Really worried what's going to happen to this game and other VNs w nsfw and heavy themes..does anyone know anything about it? 

omg this is so exciting!!! I've been on a werewolf bender lately so I'll just pretend that..he's actually a wolf and pretending to be a puppy or smth lol..yes..yes..

Wow really excited for the full release! 

I was plesantly suprised by the use of His and MC's POVs. It's not usually done in otome VN but it did remind me of dual POV romance books so I thought that it was a rly nice addition! Initially, I found the use of 'I/You' pronouns a bit odd but as I kept playing I realised that it was a really smart choice. It really changes the tone to something far more intimate and it really feels like he is actually talking to/narrating directly to the player!

I'm not gonna lie, I usually like when yanderes have more concrete or believable reasons to be obsessed with their darlings. And the fact that he was smitten immediately..hm..I'm just not huge on insta-love ig. In a sense it would make sense that he'd attach to her psychologically after 1) Shy boy's first kiss is stolen by a pretty girl in a nice atmosphere, 2) confronting her potential SAer, 3) being perceived as a hero/validated/protector, 4) getting beaten-near death, 5) long healing process w immobility etc. Yea, it makes a bit of sense why a lonely,  introverted person might get attached rly quick to someone, esp after/during a traumatic experience. To him they already feel like they've grown soo close. However, I feel like the insta-love doesn't do your narrative a lot of justice. I feel like it'd be more interesting if this was a bit slower and more progressive, through the stalking. This was already done but I'm just saying that I'd be more impactful if he wasn't 'in-love' w her from day 0.  And that this obsession could grow day by day, like starting as an excuse to first want to 'check on her' bcz of the reasons above. But if the current depiction is want you want to express obv do what u want, it's ur game! I rly love yanderes from a narrative prospective (and other reasons lol), so I'm just saying!

I rly hope there's more options for shyer, more timid and non-abrasive MC as quite hard to self-insert..Also as some other people have pointed out, the hairless grey MC makes it rly rly distracting when she's in CGs.. (i could kiinda get used to the grey skin, but the hairless head distracts me sm xd)

With love and peace, the train scene with those random girls that wanted Jayce to choke them and he actually did AND he actually like it...rly took me out..and honestly felt like cheating..Ik he was imagining MC but he was touching a real person and basically enacting sexually implicit actions and even found the girl's expression hot... This is just my opinion and preference, but it did make me uncomfortable and I lost quite a bit of interest in him as a love interest. I continued bcz I was looking forward to the demo for a while and was curious abt where the story would go. Then I saw the knife-asshole-fisting scene..and was like ''wow, I have bigger things to worry about, this man is UNHINGED''. I think u did a rly good job w what scene bcz Jayce IS a yandere and his more violent scenes should make us at least a bit uncomfortable bcz it makes him more dangerous..like this man can seriously hurt ppl, and it should be taken w the gravity it deserves?

His fumble at their first meeting in the shop made me so uncomfortable but actually in a good storytelling way! Like it felt realistic in a sense? Seeing his POVs, potential OCD? (repetitions and very specific planning etc.), it rly did feel like he was rly startled by the MC's presence, and he genuinely felt quite creepy lol. I would have loved for MC to have more personalised dialogue when talking to him or reacting to how he's behaving, even in this one scene. I've seen one of your posts for wanting to move the plot forward and that a shyer MC wouldn't..I don't fully agree but if you where looking to make the game feel a bit more personalised, the plot could proceed as written but just give the player the option of slightly differently written choices with different wording which could lead to the same action (thus satisfying players who want to roleplay without always being forced to have an abrasive personality?). Or even when the MC asked a lot of questions, we weren't given the choice to choose the sequence. I know it may seem like a small thing, but as a player, when even questions towards Jayce, I have no control over what I'd ask first, or how I'd react, it feels like I'm reading a story rather than playing a VN. 

Sorry if this is rly long-winded or sounds rude in any way! I've just been playing otome games for a while and rly rly like the concept and potential direction of your game and I wanted to offer my thoughts during this experience. I seriously cannot wait for the different Arcs and to meet the rest of these characters you have in the works!!!! I really hope you the best in the dev of this game and whatever other projects you'd like to work on in the future!

I love this game smm it's always in the back of my mind ever since the first demo. I love the story, characters and I'm a sucker for yanderes and past lives so I loved all the times I played and replayed the demo! I seriously love the world and story you're putting together and hope you take as long as you need with it! 

Kinda embarrassing, but I just had a nightmare that Sol was changed to the antagonist and he couldn't be romanced anymore 😔 so my first instinct was to check the page ig 🧍🏻‍♀️🕳️

I seriously love Ren and this game sm...it like scratches an itch in my brain. Last I played, there were only two days available so it's super exciting to be able to see more! The art and writing is amazing,  the build up of smth more lurking beneath the surface...And how Ren feels like he's the only one actually looking at the player, esp with the 4th wall breaks at the ends of day 4. I'm super excited to see where it goes with future updates!

during the plaque scene (to go home or diamond kingdom) i got an error:( [image 'nox s2' not found]

edit: wait it actually keeps happening every so often with nox..is anyone else experiencing this is it just me?T-T

Ikr?? Every single VN I've played here has dif pronouns why is it so hard to implement?T-T I rly wanted to play it but I don't wanna be a guy:(

I'm so excited to play!!! I found your game three years ago when I first started playing indie otome games here and the fact that it's finished is almost nostalgic. Thank you for your work!!🩷🩷

for some reason i cant hear the voice acting at all:(

GOODNESS GRACIOUS I DIDNT KNOW FULL VERSION WAS COMINGOUT SO SOON??????

I can't wait for the full game >.< i want them both >:)

I love this game and Mychael sm!! thank you for the Day 2 update!! Can't wait for future updates!! >.< <3

this is incredible i love otome isekai manhuas so finding an indie game like this is amazing T-T

i can't go fullscreen help (╥﹏╥)

I JUST NOTICED THAT THE MAIN MENU AND MUSIC CHANGE AFTER FINISHING THE DEMO-----------------THATS SUCH A NICE TOUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is soo good!!! its quite hard to find yandere otome characters so I'm rly glad that this story's main love interest is one!! i really hope that in the future the mc sees him in a better light and actually falls in love with him..as im rly into yanderes its sad that MCs are almost always repulsed by them so hopefully its an option in the future (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

i love the art sm and like other ppl have said i rly like his switch..kinda gap moe if you ask me (//▽//)

i loved this game so much!!! i feel so lucky for finding it:,,,,,) i binged the whole thing in less than a day. every.sec.worth.it 

from the art, the storylines, the characters and love interests, the gameplay, voice acting...it was such a refreshing and unique experience!! my face hurts so much from smiling and blushing so much (⁄ ⁄>⁄ ▽ ⁄<⁄ ⁄)

i usually don't like english va but in this game it was absolutely incredible!!

I haven't felt this happy in a long time ( ´ ▽ ` )