You really did do a good job, should be proud
Blonguin
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Genuinely interesting. The absurd plot is fun and creative. What I found interesting was the ludonarrative! It was annoying to pick up all the needles, getting pricked and reading Ouch, but annoying and repetition is probably what the character would have felt. The repetition of the action isn't boring though, it's executed nicely so as not to bore the player. All around, very fun, good ludonarrative.
Obviously not much to say, but I still found it interesting. I couldn't get out of the first room, and I assume that's all there was to it. Still, as this was only a prototype and a test, I should say that I think it's something worthwhile to pursue. The general vibe did fit quite nicely (the music, the dialogue, the irrationality). I could imagine this being a small fragment in a larger project. Well done :)