This must be Macca's because "I'm Loving It!", a couple questions/suggestions about future additions I'd love to see/think would be a good addition, though of course you're in charge, Nate the boss man.
Firstly, the delinquent, I'm personally hoping for a good/less bad end for her, maybe if you save everyone and get the GOOD ENDING(TM) then Jane takes her in or something, your choice where to go with it of course, I just feel bad for her.
I was also kind of expecting her to not recognise you if you wore the fox mask into her boss room, especially if it's the second time on and you've already beat the fight and just want to go between the rooms.