Story seems ok so far, same with another post here, more interested in tracking that fucker down that burnt down the house and killed maggie, one suggestion I would make though, there seems to be alot of conversations where its steering the reader (player) into situations where there could have been an option for a less "black and white" answer. Overall its not bad though..
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