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This IF is really promising and I'm looking forward to how it continues!!

 Just an accessibility note about the UI, dark modes are harder to read for people with astigmatism (like moi), it makes the words blurry, which is why its always fantastic if there's a choice between light and dark mode. 

For astigmatism specific accessibility, low-contrast is easiest, like black text on beige/gray, but a typical light mode may fit a broader range of conditions.

excited to see the new systems, and definitely going to support on patreon when announced!

Really looking forward to more of this! A back/undo button would be super useful though, for cases where you click the wrong option. It's not super high stakes in the state the IF is in now, but as the story gets longer, it would be good to have.

I've played this IF dozens of times but I've always accepted Gabriel's help in Chotou. For the first time, I didn't, and HOLY FUCK THAT CHANGES EVERYTHING. I shall say no more bc spoilers but needless to say, I'm obsessed and I love this IF even more.

This story is truely fantastic and I was delighted to hear of chapter 3 part 1's release. I discovered Within Your Eyes shortly after chapter 2 was released.

Leese Van Laere has my whole heart and I'm terrified of when our secrets are revealed to him. While I'm definitely going to do several playthroughs to see differen't choices, Leese and Gabriel's poly route is my 'canon' and I really like how the poly choices show a budding connection between the two, not just between them and the warden.

I simply can't wait for more, yet I hope you take your time to craft the story you want to tell. Books can take many years to write and I hope you don't hold yourself to a schedule that burns you out. Your story is worth however long it takes to make!

I love this story. I've very recently gotten into interactive fiction games and this is one of my faves so far. I love that I can play an explicitly trans MC, Ash is swoony, Grem is very sweet, and the mystery about the MC's past is intriguing. Definitely following for further updates.