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Thanks! I know when I started just playing around with the notes to find an idea is that it reminded me a lot of "Lost at a Sleepover" or "White Space" from Omori where there's something kind of unsettling to it but also kind of lazy

With your explanation, I could see it working as a kind of intro / pre battle theme in a game. I didn't really take the time to see it's use case as is and kind of judged most of the submissions on the idea of a "complete". Now, I'm also thinking something like Approaching Champion Cynthia's pre battle theme in Pokemon where the whole point is just build up and create tension before the looping battle theme. So either option is pretty valid: either this acts as a standalone build up theme to be paired with another piece with the resolution to the build or to expand on it as a singular piece.

I'm glad my feel based opinion is helpful in some way!

Thanks! I wish I had more time over the weekend to flesh it out and really have a strong start, middle, and end, rather than just one part in loop.

Very suspenseful vibe to it. Definitely one of those thematic OSTs where someone is in a spooky place. No particular comments on areas that I would like to see improved in particular. Well made overall.

Very creative piece. I really liked the wacky feel to it. Definitely one of those pieces where its meant to capture an idea rather than something to be purely listened to. Not much to comment on in my end. Personally, I really liked how the piece started and the speed changes was a little jarring, but I get that that's the point. Very heavy Donkey Kong vibes for me at the start especially, for some reason.

Very nice song with a complete structure of a beginning, middle, and end. Overall good with a nice cohesive vibe to it. Nothing in particular that I can comment on areas that can be improved.

Very thematic and specific vibe to it. It's definitely one of those tracks that would work really well when paired in a game, and not to be solely judge for listening on its own. The only comment I have is that the transition between the ideas seem kind of abrupt. That may be the idea though. Other than that, there were a lot of ideas and each one contributing to a nuanced feel to overall vibe. Very well made.

Very nice suspenseful theme. The guitar is really well done. It's a particularly long piece, and I kind of felt like the build up was really long. I liked the idea at the start when the build up led to a bigger build up and then another, but then it kind of felt like it took too long. It was really nice when it all came together in the end. Maybe this is just the artistic vision and intentional, which I can kind of get based on the title. Very nice and well put together piece.

Very very good start with a build up that makes me really anticipate the rest of the song. However, I somehow felt like the entire song was primarily build up with no drop or release or whatever the term may be. So there's no feeling of beginning, middle, and end. Just beginning. I'm not sure if that was just a time constraint issue, Other than that, I think the production quality was very good.

Very high quality production. I'm personally not too big of a fan of the wub sound use, but that's a personal take. Otherwise, a very complete package with a beginning, middle, and end, as well as a unified vibe to it.

Very complete structure with a beginning, middle, and end, You captured the theming really well. I don't have any particular area to nitpick.