I really enjoyed getting to try the game out for free, but I feel like there's some elements to be added that can make the game far more satisfying.
As of the demo, leveling up any girl just gives you a bigger number and eventually a new scene. Number go up isn't very interesting and doesn't make the player feel like they actually have more power. Right now it feels like a lewd clicker game with random teasy visual novel scenes.
It would be much better if there was an illustration for how broken the girl's mind is.
It could be:
- a brain being cracked and crumbled
- the girl's face and expression changing
- a symbol of their soul being changed
Any of those examples would be great and would make the player feel like they have impact.
In the original Spiral Clicker when you leveled up a girl there was a mind break challenge. It would be a great addition to have some kind of clicking challenge or puzzle to complete when you reach a significant level like for unlocking a cutscene or new state of corruption. As well as little responses from the girl as you're getting closer to completing the challenge.
Minor note the fade transition on every scene change gets annoying after a while. So much waiting!
That covers my main suggestions for the game that I think will make this a much much better game.
A lesser, but still very cool thing to see in this game is a variation in the style of mind control on different girls. Corrupting girls into happy nymphos is fun, but not as interesting the 5th or 6th time around. Maybe for some of them you could hollow their mind into a thoughtless doll. Or make a girl oblivious to your sexual harassment while she's also unaware of her changing behavior.
Also I wouldn't ever expect every girl to have branching options, but it would be cool if you could at least with Helen. Most other girls could have one path and that would be fine. If Helen had different paths where you could choose styles similar to what I mentioned above, that would me amazing.
Lastly I want to suggest that having fewer girls, 5 to 15, that are fully fleshed out will make the game feel much more complete than having 30+ girls that are just sporadically released with random scenes. I loved the original Spiral Clicker, but it just became so messy and bloated. I see that you're setting up the story to be able to bring in any character from anywhere and take over the universe, but you don't have to make the game endlessly big with an endless list of girls. A reasonable amount of girls that get to have more scenes and interactions will be much more fun and memorable to players.
Thank you Changer for giving us this free demo! It was awesome to play and the art is great! I'm looking forward to more sexy scenes in the full release!