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Thank you for your answer! I'll keep her in mind for any future playstyles I try.

I have a character named Tiff that I like to play as sometimes. Their story was they were turned into a vampire against their will and cannot be cured (I think being able to cure what is effectively a curse to be cheap) and they are very lawful/chaotic good at different points of their story. They have dedicated themself to destroying vampires and daedra, but I'm unsure if Celestine would be able to fit into that story. Basically, I am asking if she is fully against allying with a vampire regardless of their own morals? 

I really enjoyed this game, but there are some issues I take with the story. Why Elaine went missing is very vague and there seems to be more pieces to her story that kind of leaves the ending falling flat. Such as with J and Mr O (I wanna censor their names in case this could somehow spoil something). Like what was happening there?? Why did she borrow money and what's going on with her abusive father. I guess you could answer this by making another short game from Elaine's perspective. Other than that, it was really good. I love the keyword element and the setting, particularly in the bakery. Your writing style and the way you make rpgs is very nice. Thank you for making this short story.