A well written IF! The whole atmosphere of the story flared my interest because of the tense atmosphere and characters with a lot of depth and complexity that I'd like to discover, it got me intrigued. I can't wait for the next updates! : )
OMG, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!! Please continue and keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next future chapters since I'm so curious what will happen next \(>∆<)/
Excuse me, what do you mean that was the end of the demo?! >:0
Jokes aside, that was so good! I got so hooked learning about, well, everything in that IF! It was super interesting and intriguing to the point that I forgot it was still a work in progress lol. Nevertheless, i enjoyed it and I'm obviously looking forward for the upcoming chapters. Keep up the good work!! \(030)/
One of the most interesting IFs I've ever read. I hope (even though several years have already passed) that this story will still continue! I'm so hooked and curious what will happen next \(0∆0)/
This IF was such an emotional rollercoaster ride and I absolutely enjoyed every bumps and turns! The characters— especially papa Bear— were so lovable and I appreciated every one of them because they were so well written. They all grew up too fast in a place where numbness was the main factor of their emotion and it saddened me.
Now, don't get me started at how painfully beautiful this what was made like from the building up suspense to the dawning horrors of what was happening then to rebelling against the propaganda— all of that kept me up in my toes and I either laughed or cried or resolved in curiousity on what will happen next. It was just that good.
At the end, I, of course, enjoyed and loved this story. I totally recommend this to anyone who's willing to give this a read!
