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Have you ever played Wildermyth - at least the pre-Omenroad campaigns - or picked up the Lone Wolf series by Joe Dever? I think you should.  You may find a few insights or more about how best to approach the pacing of your game. Especially with how Pyre and its surrounds are designed or explained to the player. The best part about Dever's work is that most of it is available for free at Project Aon online and it won't cost you money, only time. Greanted this is mostly SFW-ish stuff (unless you bolt  on Stanfreed's Spicy Events mod to your version of Wildermyth) but I think it is time well spent on your end and for the future of Refuge of Embers.

It's clear this was a work of love and that it has potential, this game you're making. Please don't squander it and all your hard work. On the other hand if you need a reviewer or a copy editor and translator .....

Played only the Steam Demo (somehow completed a run with Lena, or so Steam says???) and these are my observations:

- The pacing is very difficult from the beginning of the game. Could do with a reduction of half or 2/3 of the current dialogue lines, to improve flow and user engagement. Until Remi fell the game felt like it was going nowhere. There seems to be a lack of economy of meaning when it comes to the vast amounts of walls o' text coming your way. 
- Only Eryn seemed ready for yiffing because you spend so much time around her, narrative wise the others felt too emotionally and socially distant - and conversely gave off NAFF vibes, boner willets for Lucine notwithstanding. Perhaps it's just me.
- Was not sure what to do, it seemed more like an 80s/90s era gamebook dangerously edging (ha ha) on being pulp quality. with very little (oh, how very little) to keep a player/reader engaged. Maybe a tutorial at the start explaining how the game works - for instance I did not learn that there was a "hidden object minigame" to start off with until I re-read the demo description.
- A lot of the choices and decisions you make don't seem to feel impactful or significant like in real life. This needs to be changed.

I was mostly turned off by this game. Even Wildermyth with any of Stanfreed's mods installed feels so much more powerful, interesting and impactful than whatever this was (and it can be far more erotically charged even with the near-lack of n00dity that Wildermyth is known for). Even Dispatch does a better job of it - even though given the acolades it's received it's unfair of me to compare this with Dispatch.

Otherwise, prepare to compete with the INTERWEBZ which can provide whatever else this game had to offer AT NO COST. This game has the same quality of life that making love Asian-style is known for - two minutes and you're done, and not feeling any better for it.

I can feel your pain bub. HINT: the keyword you need to get it done is in one of the LEAST likeliest places. You will simply just have to search everything, even anything that isn't directly connected to it. Infuriating? yes. Illogical? definitely when you realise where you get this keyword from. But unfortunately that is how the cookie is crumbling, maybe I should just play This Is The Police or Phantom Doctrine instead.
I understand that this is just a "first version" but it is feeling more and more like a proto-pre-alpha version than what should be a public beta. If I were an investor I'd be having second thoughts about letting the devs play with my money.

This game has potential, but stuck at the Patrick Raven case. Perhaps I will replay it and crack it. Perhaps I may watch yT replays (EDIT: I did and closed it).

SPOILER ALERT: I only played a demo, and I concede that this review is very harsh. But here goes.

One thing is certain: the way you interact with the evidence and arrange it to close a case is far from polished: you have to keep going back and forth between your casebook and the facts (viz, "Keywords") of the crime scene is a hassle. Especially if you have a bunch of keywords all over your casebook but you can't make sense of where you got them from.

The Patrick Raven case (mission 2) exemplifies just how annoying this can be. Many of these keywords are sometimes out of context. Or, how does a threat by the deceased to kill someone with a gun  "shoot" inspire you to believe that the placement of roles in a production (a  "shoot") had a bearing in the case? and why is it that I have to get the party invitation to get the keyword "role", but I can't get it from a letter taken from Keller's blasted out person, even though this is no less relevant than its place and context in the entire mission? this is an utter non sequitur.

On the strength of how there are no reminders of where you got your clues or keywords (cluewords????) whatsoever I would not recommend this game, not unless the devs paid you Robuxxx or $$$$$.

To Devs: Suggest (re)playing Phantom Doctrine to get a feel of how better to organise the user interface to better help people whose memory is bad, otherwise this is going to be little more than a point and click hassle.  This game is  NOT how most cops, detectives and spies do their sleuth work.

Not sure but they should be poseable in both Godot and Unity.

Unfortunately animation is impossible, because to do so requires either additional work with 3d modelling software, or GIMP to create frame-based animation. Given the size of these buildings' bitmaps, I'd say your best bet is to get Blender and create the animations you need.

Sorry, I am afraid I can't do that. Perhaps you can find someone on fiverr who can do the conversion work?

I will try but it's not an easy task. Things in my life are being swept up by a new project.
It will be a while before I can make any of those assets available, again but I will try since there is demand.

How much would you have paid for anims, anyway?

Unfortunately no. The reason why my models are so cheap is exactly because they have no animations.
These models were originally created in BH3 format, animations for BH3 usually do not work with any other file format. 

Glad to be of service!

There's more to come.

Happy to hear of it. What are you using these for?

What else do you need? what are you buying these for?

They're about as good/bad as previous packages I've designed. The pictures you see here are mostly for illustration to show the optimal scale to be used for them.

No, sorry. Just FYI - characters are around 500-600 tris apiece. They're good for use at small scale - like, if you are creating a game with lots of entities, and you don't mind Tomb Raider / Tomb Raider 2-level graphics. 

Take a look!

https://beelim-solutions.itch.io/beelim-ancientbuilds-set1-walls

Glad to know that!

ALSO: You might......wanna wait until Chap Goh Meh. Just because it's Chinese New Year doesn't mean I won't be working. I have plans, oh yes, plans, on where to go next with Building Set 1.

A tactical RPG? I may have use for you. Not now, I am building my own 3d project. Come back to me with your finished game when it is complete, hopefully I will have dealt with most issues by then.

It would be outright stupid and unethical of us to charge royalties on our building packages, because they are based on examples that have been CC for centuries (thus far). HOWEVER you did raise a good question and it is thus - 

(1) I would greatly appreciate it, if in the credits of your work, you did acknowledge where you got the buildings from -- it would not cost you a thing and would be the right and proper thing to do so. Crediting Beelim Solutions as the source of any and all of your files which were purchased from me, either via itch.io or CGT.
(2) More valuable than royalty payments to me would be your reasons for purchasing my stuff. As it stands, from my Dashboard it seems you must have a major up and coming project that requires a great deal of 2.5d buildings.

I can refer you to someone who can do mediaeval stuff for you : see his page here : 
https://www.artstation.com/lawrencethegreat

Depends on your budget and your requirements.

HINT: Visit Verrix Microassets to download free 3d models to go along with these assets.

While you are at it, consider the following asset packs!

• Barbarian cavalry and warriors
• Classical cavalry
• War Elephants

Can't afford to buy anything? head over to VERRIX MICROASSETS - for free gaming assets!

Need better quality models? try buying my Ancient Infantry pack or my Greek hoplite pack on CGTrader!

Can't afford to buy anything? head over to VERRIX MICROASSETS - for free gaming assets!

HINT:  Buy 3d assets from CGTrader to complement this build pack!  we have Iron Age and Mediaeval warriors to complement this set!
else, visit Verrix Microassets for free props and more!

Well, try not to be hard on yourself. I had this issue dozens of times before when I used to do animations even with 3ds Max 5.1. Wheels would often exhibit this infuriating type of behaviour, and even to this day I have no idea how to deal with it. I suspect that it is a flaw inherent in Rise of Nations itself but I am unsure.
In any case, may God have mercy on the Kings and Conquerors project.

Here are the latest files for my latest unit. If you try assembling them, you will discover that the unit's shields swell and shrink during the attack animation cycle in RoN. I managed to resolve that issue in a previous unit by unlinking the shield but that is not an option for other units - I have a swordsman, a pikeman and a spearman left. All of them cannot afford to have shields that cannot be moved about or are stuck to the arm.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/qra621jj4g3khem/set0154_jews.zip?dl=0

Regret to tell you that it still does not work. Parts are still distorting and shrinking with rotational animations. I have tested with a Skirmisher model, and despite my best efforts, its shield keeps distorting whenever it attacks something.
I can give you my files for my latest unit, you will see that I am right.

Am I right in understanding that you want me to make changes from the Properties section for the Armature? If so, then I must warn you, I tried that as you asked but it still would NOT work. Distortions take place especially on any bone tiered off from a single parent bone when rotations take place.

Okay. 
Here you go.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/oowq3gmyp6tiy3e/psiloi_die2.blend?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/kbe9yf6t0td08rb/psiloi_die1.blend?dl=0

Here is a master file.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/gc8msjsnxpm7x3t/arrow_rest.blend?dl=0

Hello,

I am running into problems using this plugin.

I followed all the instructions as given, but this was the end result of my animation work:

This should not be happening at all. Is there anything I can do to prevent this from happening?