Looking forward to seeing how this goes, you captured what it's like to be in New Mexico pretty well.
I noticed a single line with typos while playing a build I downloaded a couple days ago. Kabir says, "No. They wants you there next to them, but they knows you have higher aspirations then being in a 'silly punk band.'"
There's two errors with "they" ("they wants" and "they knows"), and it should be "than" instead of "then".