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Hi Tracy,

Thanks a lot for your comments, 

I was trying to focus mainly on the game scene (dolphin and palm trees), not on the buttons, but maybe you are right, they are a little bit small.

Thanks!  

Hey Rosanna, Thanks for your comment!

Hey Rosanna!

Wow! You did sooo much! I love that you have the consistency of colours, objects and game style in all the scenes. good idea to separate the "help" button, so users can notice it straight away.

But I noticed that some scenes are missing the button to go back to the menu (or I can no see it because of my screen resolution?) Also, I don't get what to do in "other scenes" games. Maybe you could add more explanation. Now, as a user, I am a little bit confused.

And I would change your comment and description sections fonts, it's really hard to read.

Good Job Girl! 
Rasa

Hey Jonathan!

Good job! Your shark and background look amazing!

The only thing I would change is the button colours, maybe make blue a little bit more tint. Now buttons are "stealing" attention from the shark.

Everything else looks great! 
Rasa

Hey Bashudev,

Good Job! 

Just a few little things What I noticed in regards to UX

Your menu screen looks a little bit messy, the transparency effect for the background gives a rusty underwater feeling, but the button you make is not matching with it.

The game scene is full of intense colours.  Both scenes do not match with each other, it's missing consistency.

Game Scene is missing the navigation menu back to the button, the user needs to reload the page each time to restart the game, which is not convenient.

Keep going!
Rasa

Hey Tracy,

Your game background and turtle match a topic 100% Good job! And I absolutely adore your turtle!  

Just a few little things that I noticed. I feel that the text and buttons in the menu are not alleged, looks a little bit messy.  To have a more clear view, I would recommend aligning everything on the midline. 

On the instruction page. I might choose a bit darker background to have more contrast between yellow and blue, also I would recommend removing text underscore, italic options and aligning it in the middle. the text would look more clean and readable. 

In the game scene, I would recommend reducing text contras (to match the game colour palette) and all the buttons do not fit on the screen, but it's probably because of my PC.

Good Job! 
Rasa