I liked the beginning, the movements are very good, but in the middle and end I look forward to variation and better driving. But I liked your music! And mix I think it works better if you review the dynamics and see that too much reverb is too much to use then use it with more sense and use it to condition the development of that idea. And I would also use the initial idea to have more variation or return at some point and actually use the theme that appeared in the rest of the song but develop it. I liked your music! Congratulations!
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I loved it so much, it matched the image, I felt what I wanted to convey and interpret, I remembered final fantasy if in a way lol, it's very pleasant to listen to. I also liked the structure, modulations, how it all went together. I just think I would do something in my opinion just around 2:35 when more movement starts to continue even with it for something more steadfast with more energy without fear, because I expected to hear that and nothing returned to the delicate. And also at the end, I would take advantage of this bunch of possibilities to emphasize another end with notes with longer tempos and a movement that indicates the end, even an accentuated cadence, perhaps mistaken or imperfect, with a few notes in the middle and low ending. Congratulations, I loved it!
I loved it! I really liked the movements and structuring, and yes, the impression you described, it has a great development, beginning, middle and end, and man, it really matches the pixel image, it reminded me of old games also because of the piano sound, I suggest it now complete it once and for all with even dirtier piano effects to remember to reinforce this chiptune style once and for all, and I would try a little reverb but keep the chitptune in the main. Congratulations on the work! Incredible, it reminds me of old games and moving downwards... continuously. Show!
Gostei de alguns movimentos de variações, acho que eu não esperava esse tipo de acordes que passou alegria leveza não combinando com a imagem apresentada, não sei bem o que buscou se foi com a imagem ou imaginou outra coisa. Imagino nesse estilo um portal magico em forma de desenho animado (Tipo Disney mesmo) de magia bem leve e cativante. Na mixagem achei o som do piano muito cortante, talvez melhorar a ambientação, reverb, eq e também senti falta das dinamicas do piano parece tudo muito ao mesmo level. Tente ver como esta o seu velocity. No mais eu curti bastante a peça, e dos movimentos. Também acabaria a peça com uma cadencia mais definida em movimento e finalização no fim poderia por mais uma nota por exemplo e mais longa.... tambem ja resolveria. No mais adorei. Fico imaginando aqueles poretais de desenhos animados gostosos de assistir. Parabéns pelo trabalho!!
I liked how he approached the piano, it's very cinematic, Essepiano is really good for environments. I believe it would be better at times to have more movements to have a melodic lead that varies and arrives somewhere, it also reminded me a lot of soft jazz the music is calm, I don't know exactly if you interpreted the image that way, for me this image represents something with discovery and sonic tension mixing with some drama. Listening to your music it seems to fit the brightest parts with half of the image but the jazzy sound would perhaps be more interesting to break at some point and come back with it at some point. I really liked the music in general, beautiful work, and the mix I listen to well. congratulations!
Thanks for your comment and listening! Hi! i listening here, Yeah! I actually wrote it on sheet music and some movements would actually get complicated if I were to play it, I also wanted to enjoy this piece at home lol I believe I composed it last year lol. I'll keep in mind what you said, maybe I'll rewrite some parts, do something different but keep what I already have, just to get these issues right is something to think about. Thanks! O/