Greetings !
I love what you have made with this game so far and can't wait to see where this weird shaped story may go.
My only pet peeve with it would be what I would refer as, in this case, scenic indication.
Basically little additional information you put between *those*.
My opinion on their use is that they take me out of the writing.
Why? Because I'm a fan of medium which show stuff rather than tell me about it.
By that I mean that those scenic information are on stage, played rather than told about.
I believe that your writing and imagery skills are far more than enough to depict an action, emotion, or whatever needs to be said instead of falling back to some pesky, bland looking, and feeling indication.
Which I do believe are already superfluous in plenty of the scenes you have written and shown as is.
Oh!
During the first meeting with sporty girl and the actress who dressed as a nun in her first appearance, there is a sentence where I am quite sure you have forgotten to add a word.
I can fetch up more precise information on that if you please.
Thank you again for sharing with us such a promising premise!
I wish you a wonderful day.
Azazel Ouroboros
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That much is true, which I think all stem from know better, purification, and other puritan conception of things, which put any and all form of sexual endeavors within the taboo realm. Which they think needs to be regulated, controlled and all of that jazz. Anyway, thank you for the nice exchange of words and opinion! I will be biding my time until yet another amazing update of your wonderful game. Thank you so much for all the the time and effort you have put into such project!
I do not share your slightly conspiracy theory take on the matter.
Personally believing that the general climate of hate, dogma, and disinformation simply have all those spiteful little groups pop out into the light one after the other, seizing the seemingly opportune timing as a mere year ago their opinion was needed to be hidden as it would have been scoffed at by most, but then again when entire countries are ready to elect people pushing those views and opinion forward the situation does look grim.
I do think that love, acceptation, and understanding will prevail, even if we will have to step forward to protect them while the people chose fear over open-mindness.
I have been following this dapper witchy purple hat for a few years now, pretty much ever since one of the first rendition of Re education. The way you improved your craft as time went by is truly admirable, and I would adore seeing your full, whole, entire vision come to fruition for this game. I sincerely hope that this bill never pass, and wish you the absolute best be it creating games or anything else you set yourself to pursue and achieve. Wishing you a wonderful day!
The game looks good!
I can't wait to see what will come next.
I did stumble upon a few bugs tho.
When you use the shop you cannot save afterwards, and I mean even when you finish going through the night, you still cannot save.
As for the others bugs, the blondie first love event, as well as the sister first lust event keep on looping, event if I have the points to unlock the next level, it shows me the first event again and again, without consuming points.
Maybe it's a consequence me choosing the ignore button after stumbling upon the shop save bug the first time?
Anyway, I wish you a wonderful day!
The games looks great!
The story and building up seems okay so far.
It is pretty bare and grindy tho, as expected of a game in its early stage.
I don't like the systematic car noise whenever moving around using the map or going to see a VIP.
The fact that the animation at the end of a game isn't skippable make it feels really slow.
The fact that gift can only be offered once to a person (yet still appear in the shop once bought), cycle daily and all bring the same amount of stars makes the grind feel heavier, that along the fact that the shop can only be reset by going to the next day, combined to the randomness of the characters schedule, all add up to that feeling.
The money factor is really easy to overcome by combining great stats and clothes, which I find appreciable, but do make leveling the different characters through work thingies a bit useless except for obtaining new outfits for them.
The strategical aspect of the game is a bit lack luster, as I pretty much have the same results while randomly spamming cards, or making use of the fact that the opponents rarely use two time the same type of card, which in my opinion isn't necessarily bad.
The phone interface feels a bit sluggish, because it requires two clicks in determined spaces to exit depending on the app you are on.
Which would make a single button to close it all smoother, or maybe simply making it so that the exit button is always at the same place, enabling double clicks.
Thank you for making such a nice looking game which feels graphically unique and warm, I can't wait to see how it develop!
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You don't.
Mistakes are a part of the process as long as they are found and corrected, they are still that mistakes, not flaws.
I will stop with my word play and simply wish you luck for what seem to be an interesting project with an invested developer!
So please don't put too much pressure on yourself and enjoy the process
Oh, and by the way the music is looping when you get in and out of the shop, I only paid attention to it in the first scene so, I am not too sure how it flesh out but anyway...
Thanks for your works and efforts and I wish you a wonderful day!
Shall we create another topic thread thingie for mistakes which are not related to grammar or word plays?